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Hello everyone,


I mentioned last week that writing with different sentences is important, so today I'm going to introduce some new sentence patterns.


The Complex Sentence


There are two types of complex sentences: unessential information and essential information


 



Unessential Information


 

















Beginning



,



Who, Which Clause



,



End of Sentence



My brother



,



who never studies



,



gets really good grades.




 


 


 


 


Unessential information must be included after the subject with commas.


 


You can tell if information is unessential by taking it away. If the sentence is still ok without the information, then it is unessential.


 


Ex: My brother, who never studies, gets really good grades.>>>


>> My brother gets really good grades.


 


Because the sentence is still ok without the information, the information in unessential.


 


Essential Information


 














Beginning



Who, Which, That Clause



End of Sentence



Politicians



who are caught stealing



embarrass their political parties.



 


 


 


 


Essential information does not use commas.


 


You can tell if information is essential by taking it away. If the meaning of the sentence changes without the information, then the information is essential.


 


Ex: Politicians who are caught stealing embarrass their political parties.>>>


>> Politicians embarrass their political parties.


 


But not all politicians embarass their parties; only the ones caught stealing.


Because the sentence changes without the information, the information in essential.


 


Decide if the following sentences need commas or not.


Example


Q: My bother   who never studies   gets really good grades.


 A: My brother  ,  who never studies  ,  gets really good grades.



 


1. Patterson Tower   built in 1935    is a monument to concrete ugliness.


2. The movie   that I went to see    is no longer playing.


3. Every person    who wants a free toy    must send in two box tops.


4. John decided    however    not to buy the car.


5. The Mississippi River   which has a cool name   flows south into the Gulf of Mexico.


Try out these examples and I'll post the answers next week.


Hope this helps.


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